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Kreative Ramblings
brought to you by Karen McGreevey of Konceptuality
A Picture’s Worth A Thousand Words
But it’s not just about the “pictures” pictures that you can see.
You can also paint a picture with your words!
And this is where your writing for the copy of your Web site comes in.
Here’s an example of not very compelling writing, and an “I CAN WAIT to read more” writing:
“The girl sat in her chair to read a book.” Well, that’s sure interesting enough to make you want to see what’s coming next, doesn’t it? NOT!
Hmmm!
Let’s try this instead: “A wiggly little blond girl, rocking on her rocking horse, and humming in time to ‘The Lion King’ quickly flipped through the pages of Amelia Bedelia, Rocket Scientist!
Not quite the kind of copy you’d put on your Internet marketing site, but you get the idea!
Compelling web copy will keep your readers around for a while and have them coming back often.
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